Re: Subtly bad sentence construction

Subject: Re: Subtly bad sentence construction
From: John G <john -at- garisons -dot- com>
To: Lin Sims <ljsims -dot- ml -at- gmail -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 29 May 2015 16:34:33 -0400

I got out of that in freshman HS English class when I asked my teacher to
diagram the last sentence in Ulysses ... you know, just to show me how it's
done

Still a wise ass ...


JG

On Fri, May 29, 2015 at 4:07 PM, Lin Sims <ljsims -dot- ml -at- gmail -dot- com> wrote:

> I was never taught to diagram sentences, and sometimes I think I missed
> out.
>
> On Fri, May 29, 2015 at 3:53 PM, Margaret Cekis <
> margaret -dot- cekis -at- comcast -dot- net>
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> > When all else fails, I go back to diagramming the sentence, and both of
> > those are doozies.
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References:
Re: Re: Subtly bad sentence construction: From: Nancy Allison
Re: Subtly bad sentence construction: From: Margaret Cekis
Re: Subtly bad sentence construction: From: Lin Sims

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