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I should have responded to your comments with more professionalism - something I implied you were lacking (now I'm a hypocrite too!).
I think we agree with each other on the topic of gender neutral writing. You have convinced me that you cannot ALWAYS remove gender from sentences written in the third person, and I'm happy to know that you are not advocating for gender bias. :)
I'm sorry for dragging this on, and I'm sorry for insulting you.
Let's move on.
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From: Porrello, Leonard [mailto:lporrello -at- illumina -dot- com]
Sent: October-26-12 4:31 PM
To: Ben Davies; Combs, Richard; Becca; tech2wr-l
Subject: RE: His/Her v. Their
Dear Ben:
I said that--sometimes--you can't reasonably avoid gender. And you started (what I took as) bantering by suggesting that any writer who uses gender (a class to which I obviously belong) is unskilled, wanting in professionalism, and lazy. You said, "I feel that a skilled writer should easily be able to remove any reference to gender and still make the content easy to understand for the end user. I also feel that using "his" and "her" shows a lack of professionalism, and makes me think the writer was too lazy."
But as you saw, it isn't always easy to eschew gender--unless you are willing to distort meaning (albeit slightly in some instances). It took you two revisions (and footnotes) to approximate the meaning of some of the sentences. And in spite of your claim that writing in a gender neutral manner is "easy", Lauren is the one who actually came up with accurate interpretations. When you are working against a very tight deadline on a suite of 12 documents comprising 2000+ pages, that needs to be revised to deal with extensive changes in a new release of an instrument, you don't always have the time it takes to write perfectly gender-neutral prose. You do your best, but sometimes you hit wall mentally, and you use "her" (since the use of gender in writing is a women's rights related issue, and when writing for a product you don't want to offend anyone).
Having said all of that, I am sorry, Ben, that I got your ire up. Until you started going off on me in your last few emails, I thought we were merely engaging in friendly banter (perhaps in a very weak imitation of the style of G.K. Chesterton). I did not intent to be inflammatory. Please accept my apology.
Sincerely,
Leonard
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From: Ben Davies [mailto:bdavies -at- imris -dot- com]
Sent: Friday, October 26, 2012 2:06 PM
To: Combs, Richard; Porrello, Leonard; Becca; tech2wr-l
Subject: RE: His/Her v. Their
Are you serious?
I made a simple claim: Clear instructions do not need gender. Writing gender neutral is a professional standard (at least at my company and in my circles), and if you insist on using gender, I think you are just being lazy.
Leonard attacked me on this by calling me inexperienced.
I defended myself, and even showed people how his gender biased sentences could be changed to gender neutral.
And now I'm being attacked by the whole group for standing up for myself?
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From: Combs, Richard [mailto:richard -dot- combs -at- Polycom -dot- com]
Sent: October-26-12 4:02 PM
To: Ben Davies; Porrello, Leonard; Becca; tech2wr-l
Subject: RE: His/Her v. Their
Ben Davies wrote:
> -Should the janitor should respect all employers or just his own?
> People should respect everyone. Moot point.
Yet clearly has only contempt for Leonard.
Wasn't it just a couple of days ago that Leonard commented on some enjoyable irony?
Richard G. Combs
Senior Technical Writer
Polycom, Inc.
richardDOTcombs AT polycomDOTcom
303-223-5111
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rgcombs AT gmailDOTcom
303-903-6372
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