RE: fa-ce-tious adj. 1 Straining to be funny, esp. inappropriately

Subject: RE: fa-ce-tious adj. 1 Straining to be funny, esp. inappropriately
From: "Chris Vickery" <cvickery -at- arenasolutions -dot- com>
To: "Laura Lemay" <lemay-lists1 -at- lauralemay -dot- com>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 26 Feb 2007 09:32:24 -0800

First time I've seen this manual...they're definitely going for humor as
an element of their branding and, given the audience, it's not a bad
idea. Personally, I thought it was pretty hilarious, but that's only
because I have a sophisticated and nuanced sense of humor, unlike the
rest of you squares :)

Chris

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Subject: Re: fa-ce-tious adj. 1 Straining to be funny, esp.
inappropriately


Wow. Harsh reactions, dudes.

This manual was posted to techwrl a bunch of years back, and got a
significantly better reaction from us then:

http://www.techwr-l.com/techwhirl/archives/0209/
techwhirl-0209-00487.html

"funny and pleasantly distracting"
"It's wonderful! ..what a trip!
"This manual makes me want go out and buy the product"
"LOL"

The Helix, BTW, is an "extreme" sports watch for 18-24 yr old males.
These are the kids that drink Red Bull, watch Super MX, play Halo,
and call each other "dude." There's probably way too much text here
for this audience, actually, but what is there is written just fine
(needs a bit of copy editing, but hey, glass houses).

Really, guys. Humor is entirely appropriate in tech writing given
the right audience. Loosen up. Have some Red Bull.

Laura


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> -----Original Message-----
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> [mailto:techwr-l-bounces+poshedlyk=polysius -dot- com -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com] On
> Behalf Of Dan Goldstein
> Sent: Monday, February 26, 2007 9:32 AM
> To: techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
> Subject: RE: fa-ce-tious adj. 1 Straining to be funny, esp.
> inappropriately
>
> Forgetting for a moment the excruciating tone and the too-cute layout,
> there are hints that the writer is not a native English speaker. Do
> the
> other languages use the same awful tone as the English?
>
> And in all fairness to the tech writers at Timex, the manual might
> have
> been disgorged by someone in another department. I can't imagine a
> professional tech writer using it as a sample in a portfolio.
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Andrew Warren
>> Sent: Sunday, February 25, 2007 2:32 PM
>> To: techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
>> Subject: fa-ce-tious adj. 1 Straining to be funny, esp.
>> inappropriately
>>
>> http://btb.timex.com/instructions/Helix.pdf
>>
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Follow-Ups:

References:
fa-ce-tious adj. 1 Straining to be funny, esp. inappropriately: From: Andrew Warren
RE: fa-ce-tious adj. 1 Straining to be funny, esp. inappropriately: From: Dan Goldstein
RE: fa-ce-tious adj. 1 Straining to be funny, esp. inappropriately: From: Poshedly, Ken
Re: fa-ce-tious adj. 1 Straining to be funny, esp. inappropriately: From: Laura Lemay

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