Re: Punctuation

Subject: Re: Punctuation
From: "Bonnie Granat" <bgranat -at- editors-writers -dot- info>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Tue, 14 Oct 2003 20:52:03 -0400



----- Original Message -----
From: "Dick Margulis" <margulis -at- fiam -dot- net>

<snipped stuff I agree with>

Dick wrote:
The cardinal rule remains that _within a given body of work_ you pick a
rule and stick with it. If you pick a different rule for the next
edition, that's fine. As long as you are internally consistent, you will
not confuse your readers. There is no _logical_ reason to choose one
convention over the other in this case. Take the rule that says you need
a comma after an introductory phrase, but you can omit it if the phrase
is shorter than six words. Any logic there? None. Just a convention. And
a similar one can be applied to direct address when the sentence
consists of a brief interjection, an addressee, and terminal
punctuation. Hello World! Hello Bonnie! Goodbye Bonnie! Goodbye techwhirled!

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Actually, I think there is a lot of logic there. If it's just two words, then
there can be no confusion, and therefore no punctuation is needed.

"In the morning I have coffee."

"In the morning under the banyan tree with my cat Mergatroid sitting on my
lap, I have coffee."

(Admittedly, they're awful sentences.)

But the omission of the comma to me is logical.

Hey, how about those adjectives you forgot to hyphenate, Dick? : )

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References:
Re: Punctuation (was: I got thrown for a loop.): From: David Neeley
Re: Punctuation (was: I got thrown for a loop.): From: Bonnie Granat
Re: Punctuation: From: Dick Margulis

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