RE: Friday-type questions

Subject: RE: Friday-type questions
From: "Cadorette Johanne" <johanne -dot- cadorette -at- locusdialog -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 22 Mar 2002 12:29:07 -0500


Interesting.

In my previous post I wrote "our systems are usually shipped pre-installed," but I wouldn't write that professionally. In our doc, I wrote something like we "ship the computer with the software already installed."

However, I just noticed the following sentence in another manual: "the system is shipped with the following pre-recorded voice profiles." If we simply removed "pre-record," the meaning would be just as clear: "the system is shipped with the following voice profiles." Or, would it be better to add "already recorded?"

Johanne Cadorette


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