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Re: Increased User Visits -- Incorrect Phrasing: HELP!
Subject:Re: Increased User Visits -- Incorrect Phrasing: HELP! From:Kathi Jan Knill <Kathi -dot- Knill -at- TEMPLATE -dot- COM> Date:Fri, 27 Aug 1999 13:33:57 -0400
Need to understand, are you saying that the product will
facilitate more vists/activity/clientele(what is that one?) by
the user?
or
Your product will increase user productivity?
Kathi Jan Knill
Senior Technical Writer
Template Software
Kathi -dot- Knill -at- Template -dot- com
"Your mind can only hold one thought at a time. Make it a
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Subject: Re: Increased User Visits -- Incorrect Phrasing: HELP!
> HELP!
>
> I want to state the by purchasing our product our customers
will increase the user activity/visits/clientele etc. But I don't
seem to be able to come up with the right catch phrase/sentence.
>
> Can anyone think of an overall statement?
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> TIA
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