Re: Simple Verbiage Question

Subject: Re: Simple Verbiage Question
From: Dan Roberts <DRoberts -at- ISOGON -dot- COM>
Date: Thu, 26 Aug 1999 12:22:26 -0400

Title: RE: Simple Verbiage Question

if part of your standard audience is warehouse workers, what about something a bit more direct, something like this, perhaps....

<screen cap>
<b>Use this screen to:</b>
<li>Choose a row, level, and pallet for the item you're loading.
<li>Change the row, level, and pallet for an item.
<li>Launch soviet warheads.

heck, I wonder if I can use this format in some of my doc. Thanks Cirrus!

Dan Roberts
droberts -at- isogon -dot- com



> -----Original Message-----
> From: Cirrus Matusek [mailto:CMatusek -at- LTDCOMMODITIES -dot- COM]
>
> I keep waffling over this one:  I have a screen capture and under each
> screen capture I have a brief description (two to three
> sentences) of the
> screen's functionality (what it's used for).  My audience consists of
> warehouse worker types as well as corporate office types. 
> For the header
> for the brief description be "Screen Functionality" or
> "Purpose of Screen"
> or something else?  Before you say I shouldn't have a header
> at all, I've
> already decided that I will.  Thanks!! I welcome any and all ideas.


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