Re: Better Wording

Subject: Re: Better Wording
From: "Pilipovich, Kathleen" <Kathleen -dot- Pilipovich-1 -at- KMAIL -dot- KSC -dot- NASA -dot- GOV>
Date: Mon, 5 Oct 1998 08:01:42 -0400

> I have this sentence "The company was responsible
> for developing the integrated system, XXXXX". Do you
> think the word "responsible" is adequat in this context.
> Does anybody have a better way to say this piece of info?

I concur with others who have suggested:
"The company developed the integrated system, XXXX."

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