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Subject:Re: Clarity or Talking Down? From:Tracy Boyington <tboyi -at- OKVOTECH -dot- ORG> Date:Wed, 28 May 1997 10:46:47 +0000
> 2. When a command is supposed to by typed, put the word Type "xxxxx"
>
> To make a long story longer, she made the comment that we did not
> have to put the clarity in Step 2 that I suggested. She goes on to
> say that if the developer's need to be told that, then "We hired the
> wrong person!"
Kevin, the answer to this debate may be in your first paragraph:
>The developers complained
>that the procedure didn't work.
If the developers understand *without* the changes you suggested in
step 2, then it isn't necessary. But if they're still having
problems, it should be easier to justify that extra measure of
clarity.
Tracy
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