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Subject:Re: on vs in From:Geoff Bradbury <bradg -at- INTEXT -dot- CPSG -dot- COM -dot- AU> Date:Mon, 8 Jul 1996 14:52:17 +1000
At 13:54 08/07/96 +1000, you wrote:
>Hi all
>Please help me settle a friendly disagreement with my editor!
>If you're telling a user to select an option from a menu, should you use
>"on" or "in"? Which of the following do you prefer, and why:
>If the Online Tutor screen is not already displayed, click Learner Questions
>on the Advance menu panel.
>If the Online Tutor screen is not already displayed, click Learner Questions
>in the Advance menu panel.
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At 14:25 08/07/96 +1000, I wrote:
My vote goes to #1. Examples involving "menu" in everyday use: "What's ON
today's menu?", "We have an extra item that's not ON the menu." I'm simply
used to hearing (and using) the preposition "on" tied with "menu", rather
than "in".
A slightly more convoluted approach is to use the preposition "from". For
example, "If the Online Tutor screen is not already displayed then, FROM
the Advance menu panel, click Learner Questions." Hmmm, #1 sounds easier on
my ears.
...cheers!
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