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Subject:Re: Warning about a slow response From:Beverly Parks <bparks -at- HUACHUCA-EMH1 -dot- ARMY -dot- MIL> Date:Wed, 29 Mar 1995 07:03:57 MST
Arthur Comings <atc -at- CORTE-MADERA -dot- GEOQUEST -dot- SLB -dot- COM> asked about--
What phrases do you use to gently warn the user that some element of a
program is going to take way too long?
If this were an irreverent enough venue, I'd say, "Now would be a good
time to go out for coffee," or "Push Execute, then go out to lunch
while the program is working." I'd like something more low-key,
though.
And it's only going to be a minute or so. Any ideas?
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Personally, I *like* the "go out for coffee" notices. That type
of message always make me smile and takes the edge off of the
fact that I may be waiting longer than I expect.
"Now would be a good time to go out for coffee.
(Actually, this should take only a minute or two.)"
The first line in the above example makes me smile plus let's me
know that there will be a longer than normal wait.
The second line is an added bonus because it not only gives me
an actual duration, but "a minute or two" is really *less* time
than I would have expected to wait had only the first line been
present. (After the first line, the second line is *good news*!)
Or, you could simply say "This will take a minute or two."
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