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Subject:Re: a poser From:Bonni Graham <bonnig -at- AOL -dot- COM> Date:Fri, 11 Mar 1994 15:23:31 EST
Kelly,
I don't think it's the wording. How about:
An end-to-end pair's traffic is assigned to a segment pair:
o only when both end points are on different segments
<begital>and<endital>
o each end point maps to one segment of the segment pair.
It breaks the information up visually, while still containing the same
information. It may not work for you -- my strengths are in page design, so
I tend to think of typographical ways to edit, rather that rhetorical or
editorial, if you know what I mean.
Hope that helps! (Of course I realize it brings up the Great Colon Debate
again... : )
Bonni
Technical Writer
President, San Diego, STC
BonniG -at- aol -dot- com
