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RE:a poser
>Kelly wants help rewriting the following gem:
> An end-to-end pair's traffic is assigned to a segment
> pair only when each end point of the end-to-end pair maps
> to one or the other segment of the segment pair.
Kelly,
Here's my suggestion:
Traffic on an end-to-end pair is assigned to a segment pair
only when there is a one-to-one correspondence between
the segments and the end points.
Or if you need more clarification:
Traffic on an end-to-end pair is assigned to a segment pair
only when there is a one-to-one correspondence between
the segments (of the segment pair) and the end points (of
the end-to-end pair).
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Mark Kitzmiller, Sr. Tech Writer, Alliant Techsystems Inc., Annapolis, MD
