Re: Punctuation question

[John Allred <john2 -at- allrednet -dot- com>]

Agreed. Could even drop âleft to right.â

John

> On Jan 8, 2019, at 8:25 AM, Simon North <simonxml -at- gmail -dot- com> wrote:
> 
> Sorry, I dislike all three for being stilted and verbose.
> 
> The information is displayed in five tabs, from left to right: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details.
> 
> My ten cents.
> 
> Simon North
> 
> 
> 
>> On Jan 8, 2019, at 14:13, Slager Timothy J <Timothy -dot- Slager -at- dematic -dot- com> wrote:
>> 
>> 1 and 3 are grammatically correct, but have different styles. I tend to prefer 1, but have been accused of using too many commas. 2 is incorrect.
>> 
>> Not sure I agree with advice on active voice in this case, but if you had to I suppose you could say: Five tabs display the information: Overview, etc...
>> 
>> tims
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>> Consider the following three sentences:
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 1.    The information is displayed across five tabs, which, from left to
>> right, are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details.
>> 2.    The information is displayed across five tabs, which from left to
>> right, are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details.
>> 3.    The information is displayed across five tabs, which from left to
>> right are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details.
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Three different editors. Three different copy edits. I have my 'druthers,
>> but I thought I would reach out to all the writers on this list and get a
>> majority opinion. And yes, I am saying opinion, because I know that there is
>> an absolute right and wrong, but I need to be neutral and non-judgmental
>> when supplying my feedback and making the correction. Three egos are
>> involved. . . . 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> TVB
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>> Tammy Van Boening
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