Re: Punctuation question

Subject: Re: Punctuation question
From: Simon North <simonxml -at- gmail -dot- com>
To: Slager Timothy J <Timothy -dot- Slager -at- dematic -dot- com>
Date: Tue, 8 Jan 2019 14:25:16 +0100

Sorry, I dislike all three for being stilted and verbose.

The information is displayed in five tabs, from left to right: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details.

My ten cents.

Simon North



> On Jan 8, 2019, at 14:13, Slager Timothy J <Timothy -dot- Slager -at- dematic -dot- com> wrote:
>
> 1 and 3 are grammatically correct, but have different styles. I tend to prefer 1, but have been accused of using too many commas. 2 is incorrect.
>
> Not sure I agree with advice on active voice in this case, but if you had to I suppose you could say: Five tabs display the information: Overview, etc...
>
> tims
>
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> Consider the following three sentences:
>
>
>
> 1. The information is displayed across five tabs, which, from left to
> right, are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details.
> 2. The information is displayed across five tabs, which from left to
> right, are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details.
> 3. The information is displayed across five tabs, which from left to
> right are the following: Overview, Category, Locus, Sequence, and Details.
>
>
>
> Three different editors. Three different copy edits. I have my 'druthers,
> but I thought I would reach out to all the writers on this list and get a
> majority opinion. And yes, I am saying opinion, because I know that there is
> an absolute right and wrong, but I need to be neutral and non-judgmental
> when supplying my feedback and making the correction. Three egos are
> involved. . . .
>
>
>
> TVB
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>
>
> Tammy Van Boening
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> Tammy dot vanboening at spectrumwritingllc dot com
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