Re: Wrong? Poor style? OK?

Subject: Re: Wrong? Poor style? OK?
From: Milan Davidovic <milan -dot- lists -at- gmail -dot- com>
To: Nancy Allison <maker -at- verizon -dot- net>
Date: Tue, 24 Mar 2009 10:32:14 -0400

On Tue, Mar 24, 2009 at 10:28 AM, Nancy Allison <maker -at- verizon -dot- net> wrote:
> I suspect that, as my editor suggests, it's better to have a noun as a DO,
> rather than a clause introduced by an adverb.

Better? Why?

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