RE: Honestly -- when an SME completely REWRITES your text ... GEEZ!

["McLauchlan, Kevin" <Kevin -dot- McLauchlan -at- safenet-inc -dot- com>]

Downing, David quoted an e-mail he sent to his SME:
[...]
>   Here's what I cam up with as the revised text for the [snip] Table.
> This is a kind of hybrid of what you sent me and what was there. Your
> text included some I important points I missed, such as [snip].
However,
> I couldn't use it verboten because it wasn't in line with our
department
> style. Furthermore, I thought some points were better placed in an
> introductory section, rather than in the discussion of the fields. I
> also felt that in some places where you referred to the [snip] code,
the
> reference should really be to the table entry, since we're talking
about
> the actually [snip] data, not just the code. I also had some passages
I
> really want to keep from my original. This has created some
redundancy,
> but I figured it would ultimately be up to our editor how to resolve
> this.
[...]

Editor?  You've got... EDITors?

Holy Moley, Batman!  Some of these techwriter people have... gasp!...
actual editors.

I need to sit down.

Wait.

I _am_ sitting.

I need to lie down.

 

 - Kevin
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