RE: Active vs. Passive Voice

["Pinkham, Jim" <Jim -dot- Pinkham -at- voith -dot- com>]

For a fairly simple, practical rule of thumb, focus on writing the bulk
of your sentences in the classic subject-verb-object structure that is a
bedrock of English composition. Begin your sentence with a subject. Then
take that subject and immediately supply it with a verb that makes it
**do** something. You cannot apply this slavishly to every situation,
but you'll find it helps a lot.

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Subject: Active vs. Passive Voice

Anyone have any tips to prevent from writing in the passive voice? 

Thank you,
Michelle Vina-Baltsas
Technical Writer
Datascope Corporation, Patient Monitoring 201.995.8350
michelle_vina-baltsas -at- datascope -dot- com
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