RE: The 'user' in User Manual

["Sarah Bouchier" <Sarah -dot- Bouchier -at- exony -dot- com>]

>4th: "Upon initial login, the system displays the new user welcome
>message."

Upon initial login of what or whom?  Is this the first login experienced
by the entire system?  Or just /your/ first login?

Also, its very... dry.  

It's a good reword, and I can see why some people would prefer it.  But
as a user, I'd simply be happier with 'the first time you log in, you
will see the new user welcome message.'

Sarah Bouchier
Technical Author
Exony

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