Re: Grammar?

Subject: Re: Grammar?
From: "Karen E. Black" <kblack_text -at- hotmail -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 10 Aug 2001 01:05:04 -0400

Like Strunk says: Omit needless words.
Like Steve Krug says: Omit words.

Karen (witty sig omitted)

From: "Robert B. Kennedy" <textexcellence -at- yahoo -dot- com>
You may not want to hear this, but I'd remove
the word "type" from the sentence:

There are five notices used in this manual:
three different warnings, a caution, and a note.

You may then define the three warnings.


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