Re: can anyone suggest a synonym or a better way of saying broken dow n

Subject: Re: can anyone suggest a synonym or a better way of saying broken dow n
From: "Candie McKee" <kiruna91 -at- hotmail -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 14 Dec 2000 13:19:12 -0600

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In a lot of the documentation that was written previously, and which I'm now
editing, is the phrase "broken down" used a lot. For example,

"This file contains all holdings at that trust broken down by fund and
account."

I'm trying to come up with a better way to say this, but I'm coming up
blank. I really don't like the negative connotation that "broken down" has
and would like to find an alternative, any suggestions?

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