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My Technical Editing book (by Carolyn D. Rude, copyright 1991) says on page
133 that "if the dependent clause is made dependent by a subordinating
conjunction, a comma is appropriate between clauses." But it goes on the
clarify that statement: "A comma should be used if the dependent clause
comes first in the sentence. A comma is not necessary if the dependent
clause follows the independent clause."
So, to answer your question, no, you should not include the comma. "As" is
a subordinating conjuction that introduces a dependent clause at the end of
an independent clause in the sentence you gave. The book also says that
even though we have a tendency to want to insert commas where we pause or
"breathe" while reading a sentence, "punctuation is logical--not
biological!" :)
Hope that helps.
Megan
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From: Sierra Godfrey [mailto:kittenbreath -at- hotbot -dot- com]
Hi,
I recall my instructor in my technical editing class saying that sometimes
commas were a matter of personal preference. I've always been of the opinion
that if you say a sentence outloud and your tone implies a comma, then the
written version should have a comma.
Example:
There is no need to separate the source from this mounting plate, as the
assembly will be replaced as a whole.
Is the comma necessary? One engineer here feels it is not, but I like it
there because it sounds better.
Do any of you have any handy rules for this? I'd like some justification if
possible.