names in diagrams

Subject: names in diagrams
From: "Carnall, Jane" <Jane -dot- Carnall -at- COMPAQ -dot- COM>
Date: Mon, 16 Aug 1999 14:25:08 +0100

Hi all,

I need to use a schematic diagram of the TinWood system in the introduction
to a user guide. I didn't originally create the diagram. One of the
functions represented on the diagram is an application that, I find, is
called tinwood_oz in the system. On the diagram, it is referred to as
Dorothy_TinWood_OZ (well, more or less :-) where Dorothy is the name of the
package for which tinwood_oz is one of the applications.

The system is case sensitive: tinwood_oz is different from TinWood_OZ. I
don't want to use tinwood_oz on the diagram, but I don't want to mislead
people into thinking that Dorothy_TinWood_OZ is the actual application name.
My proposed solution is to change the wording on the diagram to

Dorothy TinWood OZ - no underscores

but if anyone has any better ideas, I'd be glad to hear them! Send offlist,
if you would - I'm on digest.

It is difficult when trying to create or redesign a diagram, originally
created by an engineer, into something that is both technically accurate and
easily understood by end-users. All thoughts are appreciated.

Jane Carnall
Technical Writer, Compaq, UK
Unless stated otherwise, these opinions are mine, and mine alone.

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