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Subject:Re: FWD: Online help wording question From:Walt Tucker <walt_tucker -at- MENTORG -dot- COM> Date:Thu, 13 Nov 1997 09:03:19 -0800
> I'm having trouble finding ways to word sentences like the following:
>
> "To select the program characteristics you want to view, touch the choice
> you want to select in the View selection area."
To view program characteristics, touch a choice in the view selection area.
-OR-
To select the program characteristics to view, touch those choices in the view
selection area.
