Re: Bad sentence #2

[Margaret Cekis <margaret -dot- cekis -at- comcast -dot- net>]

Re: Nancy Allison's Bad sentence #2:  "In order to use USB communications to control the instrument running v. 4.1 firmware, the latest USB drivers must be installed."
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I would want a definite specification of the USB driver version, instead of just "the latest version". My new laptop has both USB2 and USB3 ports. I'd probably revise the sentence to:
"Use of USB communications to control the instrument running v. 4.1 firmware requires the installation of USB?? drivers."
Margaret Cekis, Johns Creek GA
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