Need hints & tips on writing a proposal

[Craig Cardimon <craig -dot- cardimon -at- gmail -dot- com>]

Morning, Whirlers,

I offered to help a computer person with a proposal for equipment. They 
need help simplifying the language. The document does seem kind of 
"jargony."

This document will be seen by the president of the company and probably 
the board of directors.

Any suggestions would be appreciated.

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Cordially, Craig Cardimon - "The Duct Tape Tech Writer" (Documentation 
wrapped. Deadlines Beaten.)
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