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Still altogether, it's pretty much a run-on sentence.
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Sorry if I'm taking this out of context. Aside from the bad spelling,
is this whole thing a headline? Seems more like a story. Maybe the text
beginning with Donald Trump is a subhead. Still wordy as all get out.
"Obama & Romney campaigns plagued by surprise attacks"
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On 6/12/2012 10:58 AM, Al Geist wrote:
Had to read it twice before I caught the typo.... Good one
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Grrrrr....
>From the NYDailyNews.com site:
President Obama, Mitt Romney campaigns plauged by surprise attacks from supposed allies Donald Trump, Bill Clinton inadvertently hamper candidates their supposed to be helping
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