RE: Wording problem! Arrrggh!

Subject: RE: Wording problem! Arrrggh!
From: "Weissman, Jessica" <WeissmanJ -at- abacustech -dot- com>
To: Nancy Allison <maker -at- verizon -dot- net>, "techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 9 Jun 2011 11:30:53 -0400

I'd avoid the repetition, and create a bulleted list in this format.

Fixed these problems:

* Pinkies were slipping; pinkies now provided with those cool rubber tip things
* Anachronistic mastodons appeared in table headers; table headers now feature elephants
* Alphabetical sorting by middle name column in reports reversed P and Q; now follows English alphabetical order correctly
* Spell checker corrected all instances of "Betsy" to "Betty"; all nicknames for "Elizabeth" now considered correct.

etc. Eliminate the second clause if it isn't needed, or set up a table with Problem and Solution columns.

- Jessica

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