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The Microsoft Manual of Style for Technical Publication (Third Edition, page
181) says never to include the ellipsis. It uses Open as the example, as
well.
And I quote:
(Excerpted) In general, avoid using an ellipsis(...) except in syntax lines
or to indicate omitted code in technical material... In the user interface,
the ellipsis is typically used to show truncation, as in a program name, or
to indicate on menus and dialog boxes that a dialog box will appear to
obtain more information from the user. Do not use an ellipsis in this
context in documentation.
*Correct*
On the *File* menu, click *Open*.
*Incorrect*
On the *File* menu, click *Open*....
The Microsoft Manual of Style is a great reference to have for any writer
and is well worth the money.
Best,
PT
On Wed, Nov 17, 2010 at 5:41 PM, kafkascampi <kafkascampi -at- gmail -dot- com> wrote:
> ANon TWer wrote: Got my redlines back. Nope. Manual has to match the
> software. If it says Open... in the UI, it has to say Open... in the
> manual.
>
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>
> We have similar button labels that use ellipses. I do not reproduce them in
> my help or manuals. It's confusing and can cause problems when the button
> label appears at the end of a sentence.... :)
>
> Chris
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