Re: Capitalization in lists

[Janice Gelb <Janice -dot- Gelb -at- Sun -dot- COM>]

On  Jan 28, 2010 3:55AM, Deborah Hemstreet wrote:
> Hi All,
>
> Is there a definitive methodology for capitalizing the first word in lists?
>
> For example,
>
> This is used to
> 1. eat a cat
> 2. kill a mouse, or
> 3. ride a horse.
>
> vs
>
> This is used for:
> 1. eating cats.
> 2. killing mice.
> 3. riding horses.
>
> vs.
>
> Use this to:
> 1. Eat a cat
> 2. Kill a mouse
> 3. Ride a horse
>
> -------------------------------
>
> Are all of the above correct? My mind has gone blank....
>

As others have said, this is largely a matter
of style. However, I do want to mention in case
your docs are translated that our localization
people have told us not to break infinitives
across a list introduction because many languages
do not use that construct and it can therefore
cause difficulties.Therefore, they prefer
something like:

   Use this feature for the following actions:
   * Eating cats
   * Killing mice
   * Riding horses

Cheers,
Janice

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