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Subject:RE: Is there a better way to word this? From:Ron Hearn <rhearn -at- central1 -dot- com> To:"Borowik, Kristy" <Kristy_Borowik -at- lcca -dot- com>, "techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com> Date:Wed, 10 Jun 2009 13:25:37 -0700
How about something like "Click on X to go back to the Y page."
Ron Hearn
Documentation Specialist
MemberDirect(r) Product Development
phone: 604 730 6391
email: rhearn -at- memberdirect -dot- ca
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Subject: Is there a better way to word this?
I really hate it when manuals say something like: "Click the x link, and you will be returned to the x page." It's the "and you will be returned to" part that bothers me, or when people say "Click this link and you will be taken to (whatever)." Is there a better way to say that? After all, the users never leave their seats! :)
I was thinking maybe something like: "The x page reappears." Any other suggestions?
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