RE: Example of clear tech-comms and policy guidance writing this good

["McLauchlan, Kevin" <Kevin -dot- McLauchlan -at- safenet-inc -dot- com>]

 Dan Goldstein also said:

[...]
> 
> I was also struck by the general comma-phobia, which slows down and
> occasionally confuses the reader.

Hey, you're talkin' to a guy who is seemingly possessed of a built-in,
high-capacity, random-comma generator. I think everybody is
comma-phobic. 


Here are some spares - sprinkle anywhere:
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Ignore the period. The generator needs a tune-up.


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