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RE: seeking advice on the best way to phrase an error message
Subject:RE: seeking advice on the best way to phrase an error message From:"Andrew Warren" <awarren -at- synaptics -dot- com> To:"Tracy Taylor" <ipsque -at- yahoo -dot- com>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com> Date:Thu, 29 Mar 2007 17:07:50 -0700
Tracy Taylor wrote:
> I'm trying to find the best way to phrase a specific error message in
a
> common situation. Basically, the application has a form that the user
> needs to enter, and let's say he or she leaves a field empty - in this
> case, it's Phone Number.
> ....
> I was going to suggest "Phone Number is required. Please enter a
Phone
> Number." Not the most concise thing in the world, but polite,
> explains the error and what to do about it.
Tracy:
If the fields that are required are already identified with a red
asterisk or something, "Phone Number is required" seems redundant... So
why not just "Please enter a phone number"?
-Andrew
=== Andrew Warren - awarren -at- synaptics -dot- com
=== Synaptics, Inc - Santa Clara, CA
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