Re: Pet Peeves

["Susan W Gallagher" <susanwg -at- gmail -dot- com>]

On 3/15/07, Combs, Richard <richard -dot- combs -at- polycom -dot- com> wrote:
>
> Suzette Leeming
>
> > What's wrong with avoiding pronouns/gender issues by
> > rewording it to something like this:
> >
> > "Any problems with the setting can be fixed using RegEdit."
>
> You're avoiding pronouns by writing in passive voice, thus removing the
> actor from the action and making the object of the action into the
> subject of the sentence.
>
> I believe the technical term for that style of writing is "yucky." ;-)


Not just yucky, also difficult for the dyslexic and pre-lingual deaf to
process (google search for references = "passive voice" dyslexia), so you
cut out a fairly hefty chunk of your audience as well.

-Sue Gallagher
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