RE: Procedural syntax: "Click to expand" vs. "Expand by clicking"

[Peter Sturgeon <prsturgeon -at- yahoo -dot- com>]

It was active before you revised it.

Peter Sturgeon

--- "Martinek, Carla" <CMartinek -at- zebra -dot- com> wrote:

> Option B, revised to active voice:
> 
> [B] To expand the folder, click the plus sign.
> 
> 
> -Carla
> cmartinek -at- zebra -dot- com
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> Sent: Friday, January 20, 2006 7:45 AM
> To: Yves Barbion
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> Subject: Re: Procedural syntax: "Click to expand" vs. "Expand by
> clicking"
> 
> Yves Barbion wrote:
> > Hello techwhirlers,
> > 
> > just wondering, which do you prefer (and why):
> > 
> > [A] Click the plus sign to expand the folder.
> > 
> > OR
> > 
> > [B] Expand the folder by clicking the plus sign.
> >
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