RE: Seeking critiques on updated Web site

["Goldstein, Dan" <DGoldstein -at- DeusTech -dot- com>]

1. Smaller in dimension, too! No reason to have the splash page over 800
wide and the rest of it fitting within 800.

2. Actually, you might want to consider ditching the splash page altogether,
so your users have immediate access to your site navigation links.

3. I suggest cutting the word count by at least 50%. Think Strunk & White.

4. If "we" means "I" (as in, "We create users [sic] guides and technical
specifications"), perhaps you should say "I."

Dan Goldstein

> -----Original Message-----
> From: John Posada 
> 
> Steve...the first thing I'd do is get that graphic on the splash page
> smaller in file size (not dimension)...
> 
> > Last night I uploaded a completely re-designed Web site for 
> > Oppenheimer
> > Communications, at www.OppenheimerCommunications.com  .  Anyone who
> > wants to take a pick and give a quick impression, that would be
> > appreciated.

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