RE: extra words: unnecessary or educational?

Subject: RE: extra words: unnecessary or educational?
From: Watson Laughton <WLaughton -at- orphan -dot- com>
To: "'pdenchfield -at- yahoo -dot- com'" <pdenchfield -at- yahoo -dot- com>, 'TECHWR-L' <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 27 Aug 2003 10:15:23 -0500

>>If deleting words from a sentence doesn't change
>>meaning, is there ever a reason to keep them?
>>I say yes. "Extra words" can facilitate quick
>>learning.

There's always the old standby advice, from Strunk & White:

"Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary
words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a
drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.
This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he
avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word
tell. "






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