RE: "found" TW humor (low)

Subject: RE: "found" TW humor (low)
From: "Dick Margulis " <margulis -at- mail -dot- fiam -dot- net>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Tue, 15 Apr 2003 13:32:57 -0400


Lisa,

As I wrote off-list to Bonnie, the tech writing tie-in is this:

The editing rule is "Murder your darlings." (See http://www.google.com/groups?hl=en&lr=&ie=UTF-8&selm=LYRIS-9607-9978-2000.12.27-14.31.50--techwr-l%23GTS.ORG%40lists.raycomm.com for a discussion of the coinage.)

The quote that Bonnie objected too seems to me to be a darling of the author. It is a bit fun, but it does not really illuminate the point the author was making; and a good editor would have struck it as a distracting aside, regardless of its potential to raise sensitive hackles.

Dick

"Lisa Wright" <liwright -at- earthlink -dot- net> wrote:

After all, we're
>talking about the origin, i.e., birth, of the universe. A good metaphor,
>and clever use of language, in my opinion.
>
>I cannot think of a good way to tie this back to tech writing at all.
>How about this: good writing can be funny too, and metaphors are a good
>way for all writers to convey meaning. Best I can do.
>

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