Re: More on drafts --

Subject: Re: More on drafts --
From: "Bonnie Granat" <bgranat -at- editors-writers -dot- info>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Mon, 23 Sep 2002 14:45:13 -0400


From: <KMcLauchlan -at- chrysalis-its -dot- com>
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Bonnie Granat [mailto:bgranat -at- editors-writers -dot- info]
> [...]
> > If you don't tell me the conditions under which my work will
> > be evaluated,
> > you are unethical.
>
> I'd make a slight change...
>
> "If you misrepresent the conditions under which my work will
> be evaluated, then you are unethical."

Yes, Kevin, your version removes the
loaded language and it's better!

Bonnie Granat
http://www.editors-writers.info




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