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Subject:RE: "in terms of" vs. "with regard to" From:"Grant, Christopher" <CGrant -at- glhec -dot- org> To:"TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com> Date:Wed, 8 May 2002 13:29:54 -0500
Hi Kevin.
> I'm editing a document, and a sentence fragment reads:
>
> "[we] conducted a design and analysis of [our system] in terms of the
> switching efficiency, wavelength dependence, extinction
> ratio, polarization dependence and its material and electro-optic
parameters."
Not sure what "We conducted a design of X in terms of Y..." would mean
either. How does one conduct a design?
Suggestion: "We performed a design analysis of X, focusing on A, B, and C."
-Chris Grant
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