RE: "in terms of" vs. "with regard to"

Subject: RE: "in terms of" vs. "with regard to"
From: "Grant, Christopher" <CGrant -at- glhec -dot- org>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 8 May 2002 13:29:54 -0500


Hi Kevin.

> I'm editing a document, and a sentence fragment reads:
>
> "[we] conducted a design and analysis of [our system] in terms of the
> switching efficiency, wavelength dependence, extinction
> ratio, polarization dependence and its material and electro-optic
parameters."

Not sure what "We conducted a design of X in terms of Y..." would mean
either. How does one conduct a design?

Suggestion: "We performed a design analysis of X, focusing on A, B, and C."


-Chris Grant



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