Re: Looking for a title

Subject: Re: Looking for a title
From: Jo Baer <jbaer -at- mailbox1 -dot- tcfbank -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Tue, 19 Jun 2001 10:56:48 -0500

Well, I wouldn't use *both* "alert" and "bulletin" in the title. Product Alert?
Development Alert? Anomaly Alert? Application Alert? Heads Up? Like, Really
Important 411?

Our company uses "System Update" and "System Bulletin" newsletters, delivered
via email, to announce system changes and system-related events.

Jo

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Jo Baer
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TCF National Bank
Minneapolis, Minnesota
jbaer -at- mailbox1 -dot- tcfbank -dot- com

If you can remain calm, you
just don't have all the facts.

Christine Gonzales wrote, in part:

> I would appreciate anyone's help in coming up with a title.
>
> I took the initiative to create a template for certain people in my company
> to communicate/share/ inform others about issues they have discovered in
> their process of product development. My intention was to get the valuable
> information that was shared via e-mail or hallway discussion, documented.
> It is intended to be an "Alert, pay attention, caution, this is happening,
> if you are at this stage in the process, don't do X, etc."

...

> I can keep "alert" in the title, but I can't keep the
> product name. The department name is also not an option.
>
> This title needs to convey the message "pay attention" and it is intended to
> go out, via email and company Intranet, to many departments and products -
> basically everyone in the company.
>
> What do you think of the word "bulletin'? Any other ideas?


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References:
Looking for a title: From: Christine Gonzales

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